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edged_sword) wrote2020-02-19 11:04 am
edged_sword) wrote2020-02-19 11:04 am
OOC: [THE OBLIGATORY comment and crit post]
Comments and crit welcome.
What am I doing wrong? What am I doing right? What would you like to see more of? Less of? Tips for the Grand National?
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What am I doing wrong? What am I doing right? What would you like to see more of? Less of? Tips for the Grand National?
Comments screened for your pleasure, folks.